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Embers of Ice poetry by *Eclipsis:iconEclipsis:



Sprinkling sparkles descend from the darkness.
Pretty and passive with a silent sound.
White winds blow a petty pain.
Down at dawn they whisp and whiten.

Twinkling twirls, beautiful blizzards.
Great glorious tempest of tuffs.
Merry and magnificent are glowing grains.
But bountiful is the malice of might.

Night is naught, ascending away.
Falling frost nests now.
Icy I am from freezing.
Altogether alone in ice.
©2007-2009 *Eclipsis
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Submitted: January 12, 2007
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Something I wrote real quick on short notice for a poetry reading. I had a about 15 minutes to make it.

Poem (c) me... I think ^^;
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I really like the sound of this. This poem makes good use of alliteration and assonance (?).

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Thanks, you are this poems only hope so far! XD

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"Beware of he would deny you access to information, for in his heart he dreams himself your master."
I do write poems myself, but have only posted two on Da (both hidden far away in the scraps :XD:)
I don't have the courage too, as they are so personal, and hard for others to understand.
but I see I'm also bad at understanding well made poems....
I do like the sound of it, but I don't get any associations, images, from reading it...

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What do you mean by that?

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"Beware of he would deny you access to information, for in his heart he dreams himself your master."
Only that it sounded nice, had many nice words and wordings, but I didn't manage to connect the words to create a image of what it was trying to tell.

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Oh, I guess you are kinda right...

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"Beware of he would deny you access to information, for in his heart he dreams himself your master."
Wonderful work:)

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And I believe this may call for a proper introduction, and well
Don't you see, I'm the narrator, and this is just the prologue?
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Thanx for your comments.

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