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CommentsOh lovely job!
-- Space for Rent. Oh thank you! ^.^
-- "Beware of he would deny you access to information, for in his heart he dreams himself your master." This looks a lot more dynamic than your usual works. It's different, but I like it a lot! The anatomy on the forearms is kind of off - the paws look too big for the legs - but everything else looks right on and I love how its fur on its head and its tails make it look like it's in motion. I really like how its claws turned out too.
-- I am Pokemon #180 Flaaffy in DA's Pokemon Crew! Icon by ~angelishi. pretty good for under three hours, you got lot of detail and shading it. my sagestion would be to take your time and refine this one more in between assignments.
-- "about vitamins: What you really are buying, is expensive urine." - the Big Bang I agree with Koishii. This is very good for under three hours but there are certain aspects about that I think need to be refurbished. The front paw looks odd and it seems like the shoulder is pushed too far up into the body. Another suggestion I might make is that you make it look less stiff. Let it flow a little better next time. Wonderful job though for under three hours. Very nice.
-- ~LoveDragons-Nest Co-Admin Please visit my little dragons: [link] I think I am so obsessed with paws that I am starting to exagerate their sizes.
Thank you. Lately I have been putting more and more emphasis on my paws as you could easily see in my failed projects on my scraps. -- "Beware of he would deny you access to information, for in his heart he dreams himself your master." Well, the assignment did not recieve a very good grade. She said the fur was done all wrong and that it does not look at all real. I am not sure what to do for it.
I already spread the picture with a finishing coat. Oops! -- "Beware of he would deny you access to information, for in his heart he dreams himself your master." Well, this picture ended up failing all around for the assignment according to the instructor. I do not think I heard one good thing about this from her.
I do not know if it matters, but Ninetales is suppose to be doing a running U-turn. Does that change what you are saying any? Oh! The paw looks odd because I tried to make it look like it was slightly sideways. I guess I really screwed that up. How and what would I make "it" look less stiff? I am not sure how to make my pictures look like they flow. You did say you were going to help me with all this, right? Like you seem to be doing right now? Sorry for all the questions. My next 2h 40min assignment I really need to know what I am doing to make the time. -- "Beware of he would deny you access to information, for in his heart he dreams himself your master." Your welcome! If it is consistent, then it could be a good thing. Some artists draw big eyes, why not you big paws? I saw your scraps. I can tell you like paws. You're starting to draw them very well. The only problem I could see is if the rest the picture is not drawn just as well.
-- I am Pokemon #180 Flaaffy in DA's Pokemon Crew! Icon by ~angelishi. |
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